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Five is good. one of them, your head looks really short and you look angry. They're all too dark.Comment
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www.globalevan.com/newpromo
Those action shots with the clubs do make my head look small huh. And I thought my head was too big.
let me know what ya think. Most of you havn't seen me perform and don't know me. Do you think these pics will help sell me or my show? Selling myself is more important than selling my show right now but all comments are relivent.
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Evan, (Ethan)
I like 1 and 5. Some of them make me say "What?" and others make me feel like I'm looking through a family photo album. Others make me think "look at the pretty flowers." They should all make me think Evan(Ethan)=cool.
MarkComment
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Ok y'all
whatcha' think of my new web page?
BTW...the guestbook page is getting worked on still. I lost the password to change it over, so...
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Good job Evan!
A few design comments:
the menu bar should be simple and consistant:
"home | bio" are in the 'E' "Contact" is in red, and the rest are in a menu box. I would suggest putting all the links to the pages in a menu box, or having a consistant look for all of them.
Bio:
A good start, like the pic. Rewrite the bio. Don't start sentences with prepositions. Take out things like "abandoned his goals" and "trying to be funny."
Video:
If I were you I would put the "egg.mov" video on a PERSONAL webpage, but not a professional webpage. Remember, your trying to sell a product here, and with this video it looks like your product is you drinking eggs and giving people the finger.
Photos:
Less is often more
good luck,
étienneComment
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I agree! Good job Evan!!
My only critique would be to remove pics from your photo gallery that are found elsewhere in the website. This will make your photo folder smaller, plus eliminate redundancies like repetitive pics that are seen in other locations and are not needed elsewhere because it just seems a little boring and redundant.
Catch you on the street sometime...Comment
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Evan,
You guys did great.
The photo on the front page and on the links page are too light. You need to deepen the contrast if you're going to lighten them up that much. There should be parts of your hair that are absolutely black.
You can save the jpegs with a higher quality too. I would recommend this for the first pic since it's the first thing that people see. Make a good impression with that one.
I think the bio and home links are fine where they are. You don't really want to highlight your bio.
The video of the eggs doesn't help you.
I don't like the photos of you in front of the bricks.
ScotComment
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Thanks guys, I'll try to make updates in the next couple weeks.Comment
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