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the first thing I have to say is....
the site is not coming up at all!!!
I am here in Japan and am not using firefox, just plain ol Internet explorer.
I have tried to open it multiple times and it just does not.
I will try again later and hopefully be able to give you feedback on the design side.
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Scot,
I got the site to come up, it still for whatever reason takes a bit of time to come up.
Here are a few thoughts:
Main Page:
I do not like the picture of you on the top, I never really liked your black paint on shirt look and do not think it really represents the wackiness that you do.
maybe more of a shot like your taped mouth with juggling knife and pancake.
not necessarily that shot, but something more like that, especially as you are focusing on:
"pancake juggler"
<Star of stage, screen and street>
As you are not doing much street performing these days and I do not think it is your focus, I am not sure I would state street.
There is probably a better way to say this or do not say it at all, just start off with the next sentence.
Categories:
spell out Video not VID
Bio section:
can you make that newspaper clippling a bit sharper, it is a bit too blury to see details.
News:
Shows, I would say schedule or maybe have this listed somewhere else, I thought it was going to be about the shows you perform, not where you are performing.Comment
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The heckler video is the only video. Could you gimme a synopsis of the computer you're using?
Thanks, Steph
I don't have real options for the front page photo. I needed something that looks like me and that's my look. It's also more professional than I usually look. Not fighting you on this. I'll get new promo photos soon.
removed first sentence on landing page.
"Promo Video" is now spelled out in the menu.
can't do much with the newspaper article. that's the best quality I could get.
my promo video will soon be done and will explain what I do. the "Shows" page has changed to "Live" on the menu for clarity
Thanks, FrisLast edited by scot; Mar-23-2008, 01:37 AM.Comment
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one more little thing I thought of...
on your contacts page have the phone numbers on one line.
with way2much it is split up.
maybe you can have name of agency on one line, contact name and phone number on the next and then email/website.
overall you always have a pretty good eye artistically and designing.Comment
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Well, ahem, I guess it's good that that was the only one I tried to look at. . .Originally posted by scot
The heckler video is the only video. Could you gimme a synopsis of the computer you're using?
Thanks, Steph
AMD Athlon 64x2 dual
Core processor 3800+
2.02 GHz, 1.00 GB of RAM
Windows XP Pro, SP2Comment
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Pankake Juggler, my ass
Forget the website ... although it's good for gigs.
Get the new photo's ... clean up the TV/Film resume' and print it on the back.
then call ...
Michelle Braverman @ KSA
818/769-9111
kiss her butt, if they take you commercially ... then get your chops together and try to get them to represent you theatrically as well.
you are the next Belushi ... don't blow (or inhale) it.Comment
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