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  • scot
    Senior Member
    • Dec 2000
    • 1169

    Las Vegas Show Pitch

    pitch for vegas. not looking for critiques. I just threw it together quickly and used it in a recent meeting. Thought you guys might like to see what one producer calls "The best pitch I've ever seen"

    **link removed**
    Last edited by scot; Mar-09-2008, 02:28 PM.
  • martin ewen
    Senior Member
    • Dec 2000
    • 1887

    #2
    It lacks humility.

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    • Evan Young
      Senior Member
      • May 2001
      • 1002

      #3
      it lacks me.

      (I'm so jealous)

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      • Jim
        Administrator
        • Dec 2000
        • 1096

        #4
        It lacks albino tigers.

        Seriously, nice pitch. Any response yet? When does the run begin?

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        • Rachel Peters
          Moderator
          • Nov 2005
          • 1396

          #5
          Originally posted by martin ewen
          It lacks humility.
          It should. There's nothing worse than contrived humility.
          Well, maybe I WILL just keep telling myself that.

          www.rachelpeters.com

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          • Mr.Taxi Trix
            Senior Member
            • Dec 2000
            • 1273

            #6
            I hate to say this, but FFucking Brilliant!

            You used your footage as well as you possibly could.

            When it was done, I wanted to see the show. And I'm

            sick of seeing shows.

            For me, it does lack a midget, but it can't be all things

            to all people.

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            • dave walbridge
              Senior Member
              • Nov 2002
              • 333

              #7
              slum

              Wow.

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