I'm cutting a video of my cabaret and stage acts to send to agents and am looking for feedback.
The first attempt fell apart because trying to piece all these separate talking acts together into a cohesive 3 min video... was just too much - none of the pieces looked amazing because you couldn't figure out what the shit was going on.
This second attempt, I like more. Its focused on a general Strong Woman "vibe". You can see that she does a lot of things, but you don't get the whole story.
The things I'm not sure about:
1. I love the song, but does it sound like I'm a sadistic man hating performer who is out to shame guys?
2. Is it too confusing? 5 different bits in 2.5 min?
3. The "legend" floating words at the beginning?
4. The interruption of "And the audience loves her."
5. The film footage quality is crap. Does that ruin the video?
Thoughts?!?
What SHOULD be in an agent promo? Places I've performed? Quotes?
My thought was to put this video (general cabaret) and a video of the whole phone book ripping act onto one DVD.
I really would love some feedback before I start putting in transitions and deleting other clips.
Thanks!
The first attempt fell apart because trying to piece all these separate talking acts together into a cohesive 3 min video... was just too much - none of the pieces looked amazing because you couldn't figure out what the shit was going on.
This second attempt, I like more. Its focused on a general Strong Woman "vibe". You can see that she does a lot of things, but you don't get the whole story.
The things I'm not sure about:
1. I love the song, but does it sound like I'm a sadistic man hating performer who is out to shame guys?
2. Is it too confusing? 5 different bits in 2.5 min?
3. The "legend" floating words at the beginning?
4. The interruption of "And the audience loves her."
5. The film footage quality is crap. Does that ruin the video?
Thoughts?!?
What SHOULD be in an agent promo? Places I've performed? Quotes?
My thought was to put this video (general cabaret) and a video of the whole phone book ripping act onto one DVD.
I really would love some feedback before I start putting in transitions and deleting other clips.
Thanks!


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