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I'm real happy with this vid for now. The only problem I see with it is that there aren't any interaction clips between me and johnathan. We couldn't include any of those bits because they don't translate very well to video. We are already working on it.
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I'm real happy with this vid for now. The only problem I see with it is that there aren't any interaction clips between me and johnathan. We couldn't include any of those bits because they don't translate very well to video. We are already working on it. -
"SOS" is kinda distracting. it's a different font from your logo not really recognizable. you might as well put "show off show" for the bug instead of sos.
the toothbrush thing doesn't make any sense. show the voluneer doing it and you do it if you need to, but don't just show you.
over all, the show looks pretty stagnant. You could use some faster cuts or something, but it's kinda slow paced.
college kids go though lots of videos so, you want to get into something good early on (first 15/30 sec.)
I can't believe you're not making a thousand jokes about someone touching your toothbrush. Or is it Johnathans? you could do a whole five minute bit about Johnathan talking about how dirty your mouth is and how dangerous it is to touch anyone's toothbrush, that evan has the worst hygene. He killed a goat in a petting zoo with a kiss. Then, you say, no jon, that's your toothbrush. and, he says "Oh, that's fine then, carry on"
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