Frisbee's unsolicited critiques

[scot]

Greg,
You need to redo all the audio on your video. Watch your video while speaking into a microphone or camera and record all of your jokes again. Can't understand most of it.

Turn the audio off on your popup quotes -- they're nice though.

It looks like you're the only juggler in the world with lobster claws. Fire is pointy at the top and it goes from white at the bottom, to yellow, to orange, to red

[Frisbee]

website

Scot,

The video is the one thing still needing to be redone.
I had the site done for me with the hopes of having the new video done for the launch of this new site...but unfortunatly my shoot location fell thru due to the temporary halt of "Comedy on the Square."

Whats up is my old video. I am working on getting an indoor video shoot lined up with two cameras and having the audience microphoned as well...which will aid in also getting the market that I want to move into.
That video is what I have for now. By summer I hope to have the new video up and online to book for the fall shows.
I know that the sound of me is bad on that video...but unfortunately it is what I have to work with for now.

I disagree with you on the logo...it is a style choice.

I thank you for your unsolicited critiques and am happy that these are the only few that you have to say as I have seen some of the others that you have done.

-Frisbee

[Frisbee]

audio

Scot,

You need to redo all the audio on your video. Watch your video while speaking into a microphone or camera and record all of your jokes again. Can't understand most of it.

This seems like a relatively simple solution to the video while I work on a new one and is a good suggestion.

Thanks,
Greg

[scot]

I don't really have time to tear into anyone right now.

There's plenty I could say about your promo. I just looked quickly to see your video. Keep it up, whatever.

[Frisbee]

unsolicited

Scot,

I am glad that you still have the time to give UNsolicited critiques...the board would not be the same with out those.

I hope your "Crash Course" show is going well, I still have not had a chance to come down and check it out...but will try to get there soon.