flyer tips please

[scot]

You guys are never satisfied

Thanks for all the tips. I'm going to keep looking over the design and trying to fix it a little today.

Chance: Great ideas for the next photoshoot. Hopefully not many people have seen and remember the ping pong ball routine, becuase that's pretty much all my show is.

Butt: The helmet thing isn't a law. Take that up with your wife.

Jim: The framing that I originally chose is intentionally repetitive so as to give a photobooth/ movie effect of a lot of action and same person, many aspects.

World: The helmet is matching up with my billboards, posters, tshirts and other branding. I want to make that in the foreground and the biggest thing so that people look at the fliers to find out more about what they've seen around town.

Thanks everybody. I'll try to incorporate pieces of each of your tips in my final design.

[Stretch]

its the face!

Keep the facial expressions, they tell a lot, convey more emotion.

On the back, or receipe side, if he is writing in black, and she is writing in red,
maybe she should sign it with a lip print?


In keeping with the theme, but maybe not enough room, how about " $15 a serving" ? or "$15 a plate" ?

interactive would be easier to read verticly if hyphonated, but may or may not be desirable. The effort to read it as is
may help memory retention.

And remember that quote about perfection being the enemy of greatness. If you didn't change a thing, it would be good.

[Butterfly Man]

hard head

atama katai or ganko

[Doctor Eric]

"but crop it so only half of your face is in the frame."

Told you so.

I like it, and I second the 15 a plate idea.