flyer tips please

[scot]

[worldwidese]

Best to drop the time and date etc to the bottom. Font size could be smaller, too. (On the actual flyer)

Get their attention with "Cooking, juggling, getting hurt" at the top in larger font.

Then the crash helmet bit, to tie in with "getting hurt" and then your mug shots.

Helmet size reduced slightly to make room for your photos, and some negative space, otherwise it's a bit too crowded and sideshowy.

The diagonals are good. The "interactive fun" bit is hard to notice. I didn't see it first time. Maybe it needs to go under the "getting hurt" stuff. Diagonal, in smaller font than the "Cooking"etc.

[Jim]

Scot,

I like it. It makes me want to go to the show. But I'd like to see more variety in the photos.

Maybe illustrate "Cooking, Juggling, Getting hurt" with the three photos. (I know you sort of did, but it could be more colorful/varied. Like put one photo upside down or zoomed in... the framing of each pic is too similar as it is.)

Also, maybe make the helmet/utensils a bit smaller and the pics a bit bigger.

The back of the card looks great.

Jim

[Doctor Eric]

Swordfight!

I just want to say that the middle picture is going to go over very well with the SOMA homo crowd...

Also, I'd say take off the quote from Hiya on the back, if you want to use it, put it on the front, but it doesn't fit on the back, and the original version you showed me without the quote just looked better.

[Doctor Eric]

This is what I was trying to explain about delivering information, and with the bad theoretical Jeopardy script...



And dont give me any crap about my 30 second photoshop job

[scot]

That photoshop stuff took you 15 minutes

And it sucks

[Doctor Eric]

Speaking of sucking...

Yah, but fellating both of those carrots to completion only took you 5

[scot]

So that makes me good at photoshop and lingual stimualation. 2 points me ... do you ever have a point?

[scot]

attempting to fix everything

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[Doctor Eric]

Nope, no point at all...

You're welcome.

[scot]

Is this what you were thinking, Jim?

[Butterfly Man]

however a helmet on Fire! ... well, well, well, That's different

Is this about Helmet Laws, then I like it.

[Chance]

Could the carrots be sticking out of your ears instead? Or maybe one piece of carrot with a piece of celery in the mouth...? Reminds me too much of the pingpongballsinthemouthpose.

...What you're not showing so far is cooking utensils.

...Maybe a piece broccoli as a lapel splash.

[worldwidese]

Try again

Seems to me that first pic of a blurry elbow is a waste of real estate. Go back to the full pic or choose another. Helmet is too big.

[Jim]

Re: Try again

Originally posted by worldwidese
Seems to me that first pic of a blurry elbow is a waste of real estate. Go back to the full pic or choose another. Helmet is too big.

Scot I kinda agree here. The attempt was good and it shook up the "similar framing/pose" issue but you could do something more interesting on the first fame.

Maybe zoom out a little bit and show the fist almost contacting the face... but crop it so only half of your face is in the frame.

Just a thought.

Jim